Writing style - The Blanket of Darkness! -
The blanket of darkness emerged the fear deep within; as I lay solitude within a cold, steel room - incarcerated from the outside world. Kidnapped from the warmth of my bed - as the neighbourhood slept…unaware of the intruder lurking within the darkness of my dwelling. His cold hands upon my body jerked me from my sleep - welcomed by his ice cold glare as our eyes met through the distorted beams of moonlight. Before I could scream…his cold hearted grasp upon my face - ceased the struggle. The blanket of darkness - my light - my day…will they ever find me!
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By Tina Dadds - titch
Tina
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